I’m very happy with the panel layout of this particular comic and the pacing with the dialogue.
Initially this second string bit with the pirates and ninjas was going to end around here, maybe a little earlier, but it went on a bit more and now it’s going to continue probably in a main storyline comic next season. Originally I had a pretty simple and rather silly death for Bly in mind, still might happen that way, we’re just gonna take a bit longer to get there and see a bit more of Jeff, his buddies and Belinda’s dad.
Wait, who is that blue ninja? Have we ever seen him or her before? Is it Sgt. Bell in disguise?
They had a blue ninja called Sam the Ninja a while back; he was some kind of ninja field hacker.